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| Really sorry about yesterday. So here's today's Sue....with a twist!
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Title: Mattrina. Sounds like latrine, so she's a toilet?
Perp Author: Disney Villain
Summary: A second Remake for my OC, Mattrina. Slade plans to blow up the Jump City Department Store with stolen technology. Mattrina must stop him. Oneshot How lame. No exciting twists?
Name(s): Mattrina. We could NEVER guess who the main character was! [/endsarcasm]
Species: Human
Hair: "long blonde hair"
Eyes: blue
Markings: Unless you count her "lips as red as blood". Nyaaah! Nauseating metaphors!
Possessions: Guns. To shoot people with! Violence!
Origin: No idea. Popped outta smoke just like the other Titan Sues.
Connections to Canon: Mattrina stops Slade from detonating some...well, detonators. Then in five seconds flat, she becomes a New Titan. Must be some type of a recod, no?
Outfit: N/A.
Power(s): None. Just big, clunky guns
Notes: Slade turned and saw an extremely beautiful teenager with long blonde hair, blue eyes, and lips as red as blood about 16 years old with an angry expression on her face. I am so sick of sentences like that I want to pull my hair out. Well, what's left of it [/endjoke]
I am going to present Mattrina: The MST'd version. I usually don't do this but as an apology present, so here it is :)
- Tags:bad
- My Mood:groggy
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| This has been a boring day. Slow at the Pit and a slow day altogether. Rating: Title: The Gift of a Life Time Lifetime is one word, dummy. Perp Author: mamoru21Summary: Jump city has finally set into a routine after the incident with Slade and Terra, but now a stranger is in town and ressurects Terra! What does he want! The first in my Daremo oni fanfics! This "Daremo Oni" is also in the Naruto section. I cry for that fandom. Name(s): Daremo Oni. Fanboy Japanese. It means "nobody's demon". Pshaw. Species: Human Hair: white Eyes: hidden by sunglasses Markings: not said Possessions: A motorcycle Origin: He was once part of a gang called the ''Knoctern Lights" and has a personal vendetta against them. Connections to Canon: He meets up with the TT after killing some members of "Knoctern Lights" and revives Terra. Seriously. Outfit: black jacket, black long sleeve shirt...black black black... Power(s): ? Notes: This actually wasn't so horrible and evil. But that annoying 'TTTTTT' used as a linebreaker. I understand the line breakers are not working but using one every three lines? No.
- Tags:bad
- My Mood:bored
 - The Music:Rag Doll - Aerosmith
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| Who here can't wait for the Teen Titans: Trouble in Tokyo movie in September? Me! Oh and if you noticed, I'm putting tags on my Sues. That way, when we reach the 100th Sue mark, I won't have to dredge through all the entries. Rating: Title: Unforseen Surprises Ooh, I can't wait. Perp Author: Raven's secret-keeper What secrets can Raven possibly have? [/sarcasm] Summary: When a girl who looks like Raven shows up at Titans' Tower, and she's begging for help, the team lets her stay. And since then, Raven has been acting strangely, and the girl turns out to be a lot more like Raven than they first imagined. Oh my gosh, it is a clone! Ruuuun! Name(s): Dove. Great. The second Sue with Dove in their name. Species: Human, from Azarath. Juuust like Raven -_-'' Hair: "Purple to yellow blonde" What? Purple and yellow clash, and are complimentary colors! COMPLIMENTARY! Eyes: Violet Markings: The chakra on her forehead like Raven. Possessions: None Origin: She comes from Azarath, which has been blown up for a year now. Connections to Canon: Like Raven, she comes from Azarath and Outfit: Like Raven's, but white. Power(s): Raven's powers Notes: This actually wasn't bad grammar/spelling wise but this is just like a Raven!Clone!Sue, and it gets annoying. There's only 2 chapters, so it's just a "Bad".
- Tags:bad
- My Mood:cranky
 - The Music:Save Me - Queen
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| Rating:  Title: Teenage Millionaire. Don't we all wish to be millionaires? Perp Author: Green Gallant. This guys SAYS he's twenty years old...yeah right. Paragraphs of Doom? Yup. Summary: The Teen Titans are invited into the house of the richest man in town Meletro Valaxeeys. Unaware that they've walked into a deadly trap which involves run off sentences like this [/end bad grammar] Name(s): Meletro Valxeeys. ....? B-wha? Species: Human. Hair: I couldn't make it out seeing there are PARAGRAPHS OF DOOM. Eyes: Look above. Markings: N/A Possessions: Nyaah...I can barely read this! Can you? Origin: N/A Connections to Canon: After beating up some bad guys, the TT just happen to accept a ride with a rich guy. Uhuh. Ever heard of never taking candy from strangers? Dodo brain... Outfit: "A suit and a cape" Power(s): Spells. OOOH. Notes: This is actually a oneshot but it still is a Stu no matter what. Not much better than yesterday's Sue but at least not a PMS bitch with "gothikal powurz".
- Tags:despicable
- My Mood:crazy
 - The Music:Dirty Little Secret - All American Rejects
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| I recognize this person from that stupid rantage over at FF.net. And she says her OCs are not Mary Sues...yeah right. Rating:  Title: Just as planned:Renewed Renewed ....Wha? Perp Author: PreyOfTheDemons After your stupid rantage, you should be prey and dead. Summary: Dove lives in a orphange and has a pitiful life. She has one freind and no one is on her side. She recieves an ivitation to Titan's Tower for her 16th birthday and what will happen next? Oh boo hoo is me, woe is meeee....waaaaaah.... Name(s): Dove Selene Artemis Lilith Grayson . I am NOT kidding. That's the most Sueish name I've ever heard in a looooong time. Species: Part demon. Ugh. Hair: Black hair. Good thing is it's not describedlike "her hair was flowing, black as onyx." Eyes: Pink eyes. Eww. Pinkeye? Markings: Unless you count her "porcelian face and petite figure" *dies* Possessions: None. Origin: She's the daughter of deceased Raven and Richard Grayson. Usually, I don't report on the comic books, but this was way too bad to miss. Connections to Canon: Daughter of R&R Outfit: Dark clothes Power(s): "Demonic powers" Oooh. I'm shaking in my boots. Notes: I hate this person so much, and this....this is just a waste of good fanfiction. There are no words.
- Tags:evil
- My Mood:cranky
- The Music:Rejoice - U2
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| Don't you love a good wankfest? I do. I have turned on Anonymous commenting, since I'm so nice. I can see your IP adressess....
Rating:  Title: Kinda SOrta Maybe? Crazy You are crazy. Perp Author: Ice Princess Ai. Always look at a Suethor's username to figure out the entire fic in two seconds. Summary: two girl traveling to jump city, one wants to meet beastboy but there seems to be more to it.like many the fact that they both have powers. and what's with the dark figures in the alleys? beastboy? I know a Beastboy but not a "beastboy". Name(s): Hikari Kaze and Olivia Ai. First of all, Jap. names are backwards. Second, NO ONE has Kaze or Ai as a last name. Stupid fangirl Japanese... Species: Humans (?) Hair:
Hikari - not said Olivia - not said. Eyes: Not said Markings: Not said Possessions: A car Origin: I'm just guessing, but I think Olivia is from another planet. Connections to Canon: Olivia gets caught by Brother Blood and kicks his butt in five seconds. Outfit: Not said. Pretty sure they're not naked [/memory of Naked!Stu] Power(s): Olivia has ice. SHEESH! I swear, ice is rapidly becoming my least favorite power. Seriously. Sues abusing it... Notes: I was THIS CLOSE to making this a "Despicable" but the fact it's only one chapter made it a "Terrible". The Suethor even makes a mistake by calling her Sue "Ai" instead of "Olivia". Maybe I should've made this a "Despicable"....
- Tags:terrible
- My Mood:annoyed
- The Music:Rejoice - U2
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Rating: Title: The Teen Titans and my OC Wow. That's to the point. No "Whispering Winds" or "Crimson Tears"? Perp Author: Mrs. Grayson. Last time I checked, you weren't married to a fictional character. Summary: The title says it all. When Chris goes into a coma, she has a strange dream where she meets four dangerous superheroes, six heroic heroes, and gets really cool powers. Which side will she join? The side of good or the side of evil? And how is she ever goi Ooooooh....good and evil....boooooooring. Name(s): Chris. And a bonus Mexican!Stu named Mikey. Species: Human Hair:
Chris - short black hair Mikey - "spiky dark brown hair" Eyes: Not described. Markings: None Possessions: Junk food Origin: Not said. Connections to Canon: None. Outfit:
Chris - "An unzipped light-blue sweater that was torn a little from the tip of the sleeves. Under the sweater was a white T-Shirt that was two sizes too big and loose red skater boy shorts with the same shoes as Mikey." Mikey - "a dirty white T-Shirt with baggy blue jeans and torn up white K-Swiss shoes." Power(s): Not said. Notes: Had this not been in the Teen Titans section, this could've passed as an original fiction. Why did this deserve a "Despicable"? Well, there were stupid authors notes in the fic and just basically fangirly crap.
- Tags:despicable
- My Mood:cold
 - The Music:Wild Challenger - Jindou
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| Over at ![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif) smsues, there was a flaming war. Sockpuppets, stupid people...ahhh, what fun. Rating: Title: Starting OverPerp Author: The Ice Goddess. It's a complete coincidence with your Sue is also an ice goddess [/sarcasm] Summary: The Titans get into a fight and their new member Misty runs away. While seaching for her Slade comes out of nowhere with a new weapon. What does it do? Read and find out. Slade out of nowhere? Slade, Slade, Slade, I taught you better than that! No Sues for you! Name(s): Misty/Ice Goddess. Oh no. Keep Pokemon out of this! Poor Kasumi... Species: Human Hair: not said Eyes: not said Markings: none Possessions: A gold locket Beast Boy gave her. Origin: Not explained. So she...just joined the TT for no reason? -_-'' Connections to Canon: Misty is a new Teen Titan and apparently has no back story. Outfit: Not said. Well, at least she isn't naked like yesterday's Stu Power(s): Ice. Oooh, we couldn't have guessed from your username. It was SO HARD to figure out [/sarcasm] Notes: I hate Suefics where the Sue is automatically in the gang for no reason. I think it deserved a "Terrible", no?
- Tags:terrible
- My Mood:curious
 - The Music:Rocks - Naruto
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| I hate when I am reading a fic and there's some stupid song right in it. It ruins the story completely. Rating: Title: The Man in the Box Who is Wearing His Birthday Suit Perp Author: djk1982Summary: The Brotherhood of Evil unleashes its ultimate weapon. But this weapon has a mind of its own, and all may fall under its rage. Some hints of a Raven and OC romance. Rated for some strong language. Poor Raven and all her unwanted suitors. Name(s): Doesn't say. Species: Human...? Hair: Dark Eyes: Didn't mention Markings: None Possessions: His ballsOrigin: ??? Connections to Canon: The Brotherhood of Evil have a secret weapon...bla bla bla, you know the rest. Outfit: He's naked. Really. He's naked. Power(s): I'm guessing it's super strength. Because the Stu threw the person all the way through two rooms. Notes: Our second fic in a row where the Sue/Stu is in a box. Sheesh, I ask for originality and this is what I get? As nicely written this fic appears to be, I can't give this an ''Okay".
- Tags:bad
- My Mood:gloomy
- The Music:Shiawase [Happiness] - Mani Laba
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| I am leaving for the day, so here's today's Sue bright and early. Goodie. Rating: Title: Um: The newest Teen Titan. Just like the other 48 billion ''Newest Teen Titans'' in the sea. Perp Author: Hella530 You know, the funny thing is, she makes fun of Mary Sues, but she has Sues *laughs* Summary: They find her being used as a weapon, can they help her regain her humanity. Because she is not a human but a Mary Sue, folks. Name(s): Um. Also known as Grace Logan. *headdesk* I hope this isn't the ''I'm Beast Boy's sister!!!'' cliche -__-'' Species: Human Hair: Black Eyes: Blue green Markings: None Possessions: None Origin: Not said. Probably taken captive b/c of her powers. Like we haven't seen THAT one. *sigh* Connections to Canon: A floating ship appears outta nowhere and starts shooting potaoes. After bagging the 2 bad guys, the TT come across a box with the word UM on it. I'm pretty sure Cyborg does NOT have a blowtorch but anyway, he opens it up and there's a girl inside. What a lame present. Outfit: Gray clothes Power(s): She can turn things into something else i.e. a table into a pillow. Notes: This could've been a ''Bad'' but the fact it's just...weird made it a ''Terrible''. Potatoes? C'mon, you can do better than that. And the misspellings of very simple words also brought it down.
- Tags:terrible
- My Mood:bored
- The Music:some jazz music...
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